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Thursday, 17 February 2005
Appleseed Book 2: Prometheus Unbound

Prometheus Unbound

Appleseed Book Two: Prometheus Unbound ( First Published 1985 )
Author: Shirow Masamune
Publisher(s): Seishinsha Co. Ltd. / Dark Horse Comics + Studio Proteus.

Summary Guide Notes: Side notes and further explanations on the summary or interesting points from the manga.
J vs E: Japanese vs English editions. Significant differences between the two versions highlighted here. J represents 'Japanese version' while E is 'English version'.

Book Two of Appleseed carries off where Book One left off, as we rejoin our protagonists Deunan and Briareos, now part of Olympus' SWAT team. As the Olympus administration is thrown into furious chaos with the unveiling of the Seven Elder's controversial HOPE plan, the Gaia Supercomputer silently goes on the offensive. Gigantic Gun Platforms to boost the city's defense? Its exactly what Gaia needed...

Chapter 8: Alien

The first chapter opens with a hostage situation where a group of armed terrorists take over a high rise building demanding twenty attack helicopters and a safe passage to the airport (for what reason, and other demands are unsure- its not important to the story anyway). Deunan headed the police SWAT team as acting sergeant, and except for minor casualty, the operation was a success, despite the brutal way the op was carried out (no hostages injured, luckily to Deunans relief!). The paperwork is something else though, as Deunan works late into the night complaining about the force's lack of experience and inefficiency. Deunan grumbles to the sergeant about this and the sergeant apologized to her about the whole situation, saying that he had been called in by Chief of Staff Nike to discuss something. In turns out that the discussion is about Deunan. Nike wanted her for a special SWAT unit dealing with special crimes, reporting directly to admin director Athena. Recounting the news to Briareos at the hospital park, Bri advises Deunan to be cautious during the training and told her that the administration has been keeping both of them under surveillance since the incident in Book #1. Bri had been observing the human refugees on Olympus. There doesn't seem to be anything out of place, but a lot of the illegal immigrants are good and might be sent in by the old countries to gather intelligence. As they conversed, the couple bumped into Dr Matthews who recognised Deunan as a SWAT team member, which he saw on security cameras (much to Deunan's surprise and suspicion). Then he launched into a long-winded lecture about human immortality when Deunan brought up the subject of how long before Bri can go home. According to Dr Matthews, humans are always disturbing and polluting the balance of nature that it would be better off to just let Bioroids inhabit the planet. Striking Deunan as she thinks that Dr Matthews knew something about what's happening at Olympus, only to find out that the whirly-eyed doctor is simply promoting his book 'Human is Alien' which he enthusiastically encourages Deunan and Bri to buy a copy each!

Some time later, Deunan waits at the pre-determined meeting point for Chief of staff Nike, who showed up to pick Deunan up personally much to her surprise as she didn't see any bodyguards of secret service staff escorting such a high profile official. Hopping into the car, they are on their way to see Athena, Deunan's new boss. On the way Nike discusses the hostage situation and terrorism in general from the administration's point of view. Nike revealed to Deunan their suspicion of the recent actions of the Legislative Council (Seven Elders) who collected all the people from Badside whose genetic material was used in the first generation- including Deunan herself! Much to Deunan's surprise, when Nike mentioned that there are a lot of Bioroids carrying her father Carl Knute's genetic data. However, Carl refused an invitation to settle down in Olympus. Deunan confirms her suspicion that there is some purpose of her presence in Olympus. Does her father have something to do with all this?

At this point Nike cautioned Deunan that they were being trailed- by none other than Arugess (see Book #1) from the FBI, one of the Council's people. The tracking ended as Nike turns off into the Aegis Crime Elimination Academy, off-limits access for civilians. Nike heads off to pick up some documents and to meet the lieutenant in-charge while Deunan creates a fuss on the training grounds, almost shooting a rookie. Then Nike and Deunan slips out to Athena's. Deunan meets with Athena and an ESWAT official as they go through her files. It appears that Deunan hasn't had much military training or experience, but she is good enough for an assault position at the time being. As Deunan goes off with the official, Athena discusses Deunan's position with Nike. They are monitoring and isolating the most dangerous people the Council brought in from Badside.

Meanwhile, at the Council HQ, Hitomi chats with the Seven Elders to learc of what they are up to at the moment. The Elders gave a lengthy explanation about the crimes of humanity and their proposal to create a perfect society, justifying the need for total Bioroid society as a solution. They knew about Deunan being taken in by Athena, but they have no need for her to carry out their current plan. Deunan was briefed on her schedule and was told for the first time about the exhibition of the new police system- eight large multi-legged weapons platforms. Their function is to counter any Landmate crime that might arise when the LMs go on sale for the public. After a long day, Hitomi ponders her conversation with the Elders and the meaning of 'happiness' for her as a Bioroid. And Deunan's explanation isn't much help... ^_^ Let's call it a night...

Notes: 1) Alien- Human is Alien, Dr Matthews book. Its complicated... 2) The Kotus in the police force is one of the master test models of robot police, planned to be used worldwide. 3) Deunan's transfer to the ESWAT team was more of a move to tie her down rather than utilising her skills and abilities. 4) Deunan's Briareos doll is very cute... ^_^

J vs E: 1) The Aegis Acacdemy of Crime Elimination facility has the acronym 'ECES ESWAT' in J while E has it as 'AACE ESWAT' on the front gate. Probably just a spelling thing.

Nighty Night Farmer Bri!

Chapter 9: Dominate The Mind

At the Bureau headquarters, the members of the Olympus administration is having a parliamentary session (I'm assuming it follows British administration that is- anyway they are debating and voting to pass bills). We join as the administration passes the bill giving the green light for the first phase development of the Gun Platforms despite Athena's objections and suggestion that the better way to combat crime in Olympus would be to restrict sale of Landmates. Moving on, it is the turn of the Legislative Council to table their motion for a new law. The law concerns the human stress and the utopian society, an issue further pressed by the latest incident involving humans (see Appleseed 1). The council claims to have analyzed the problem and arrived at the only workable solution- the HOPE program for the optimization of the human race. The minds and bodies of humans must be regulated, making them exclusively Bioroids. Everyone was in shock hearing the drastic, unexpected proposal...

Meanwhile we take a little break as we follow Deunan getting Yoshi to assess and fix the damage on her Landmate. Yoshi talks about the need for checking up a machine, and that involves cost, so Deunan isn't to keen and just asks him to replace the parts. Following that taking a look at Bri's installation of his new sets of eyes. Dr Matthews then advised Bri to let the Mech team fix up his nervous systems MODS for his on-board weaponry.

Cyborg Pick Up Line?
Boys will be boys... ^_^

Back to the hot debate on the HOPE plan. As the Council Elder vigorously justifies his proposal for a debate on the topic, Athena and the rest of the administration gets restless. The Council is definite that by letting humanity continue as it is it will only lead to death an destruction. Humans had become too materialistic and individualistic that their ability to co-operate and flourish in a society are gone. The solution is to regulate humans, pre-program them with the necessary awareness by implementing Bioroid technology- only then can true Utopia exist. Athena first orders a news blackout, followed by disarming and contain the legislative block. She is fully aware of the scale of the problem and questions the council if their proposal conflicts with the definition of 'humans' who they (the Bioroids) were made to serve and preserve as a top priority in the first place. Before letting things go further Athena suggested to have Gaia analyse the definition of 'human' and whether there is even a need to debate such a proposal. The Director himself will take the matter in his own hands, firstly by ordering the reprimand of the Elders in a 'prison' where they could be available to the administration at all times. The Council muses...

The flaws of humanity
Sowing the seeds of HOPE...

Notes: 1) Dominate The Mind- The only way to ensure humanity's survival. 2) Bri's built-in weapons are linked directly to his nervous system, that is he can control it by thought rather than mechanical means.

Chapter 10: Hide & Seek

Chapter 10 opens with the viewpoints of Athena on the issue at hand - that humans if left to their own will ultimately choose the pathway to death and destruction of their species. So should Bioroids take the initiative, or as the Elders put it, 'hijack' the human race in order to preserve their survival? The discussions prompted the Elders to ponder their purpose of existence, as Gaia's consultant and CPU. Gaia is a mere machine, its decisions taken in an unbiased and totally objective conclusions. And then it dawned upon them... the Director is going to make Gaia decide on such a complicated 'human' issue without their input! Hitomi's help was enlisted immediately. Meanwhile, at the Gaia control center, the technicians and engineers are having problems getting the supercomputer to feedback. Gaia kept asking for more Data when no more could be provided. Another cause for concern is that apparently the only active communication by Gaia was with Tartarus, both apparently 'talking' to each other referencing data related to Bioroids. Something is very wrong with Gaia!

More Data Required...
A seriously confused Super-Computer!

Hitomi visited the Elders as requested, and they quietly hatched a plan for her to reset Gaia's memory bank. Hitomi enlisted Yoshi's help to carry out the mission, but unfortunately (or fortunately) while smuggling out the memory bank plug from the Elder's detention cell the duo stumbled into Deunan's SWAT team. Carefully terminating Yoshi's quick-escape plan, Deunan was harshly reprimanded by her squad leader for acting on her own. In truth Deunan had to take such action to prevent any serious injuries or death to both Hitomi and Yoshi, knowing the trigger happy nature of the SWAT Team. Hitomi must have realised this.

Deunan on Duty
Deunan getting strict with Hitomi

Chapter 10 Part 2: Hide & seek

While supervising Gaia's response under tight supervision (Director's orders), Athena was informed of the skirmish that had occured near the Elder's captive cell. She decided to have a word with the Elders personally immediately on learning their intention to stop the programming of the Multi-Legged Gun Platforms (henceforth to be known simply as "Spider GP" in this review) by Gaia. Right about the same time, Gaia finally reached aits conclusions, accompanied by severe heating of its CPUs. Switching to the Elder's cell, they conveyed their concerns about the Spider GPs to Athena. Collectively the Elders agreed that Gaia by now would have concluded that all Bioroids are a threat to humanity, and the only logical path would be to deploy the Spider GPs as a response against the Bioroid population. It was too late however, as the Spider GPs programming was due to be complete for the next day's Parade to display the Spider GPs to the public.still suspicious, Athena can only promise to impose controls on the Spider GPs. Meanwhile at the Spider GP base, Gaia made its first move. Hypnotizing the programmers through the control monitors, the Spider GPs were fully loaded and armed with live ammunition- ready to execute Gaia's command.

Boo!
Multi-Legged Gun Platforms will protect your city! (maybe)

In the next scene Deunan joins Briareos at the hospital both for comfort and security. The couple's privacy was intruded by Arugess, a FBI human spy posing as a Bioroid Squad Leader in the Director's SWAT team. A number of human spies were planted by the paranoid early planners of Olympus to monitor the Bioroid Government's actions and plans. Knowing that Hitomi's DNA contains the key to shutting down the whole city and the fact that the Bioroids have her in captivity, Arugess wanted Bri and Deunan on his team to retrieve Hitomi and to standby in the event of any emergency. Arugess also shares the concern of the Council of Elders regarding the Spider GPs. Deciding that this is the best course of action to take, Bri agreed to team up with Arugess and together with Deunan (in Guges) met Arugess' team at the Olympus Crime Analysis and Remand Center. Kotus was also part of the team, much to Deunan's surprise! What follows next is a swift operation to neutralize the guards and security, and Hitomi and Yoshi was surprised to see Deunan -again, and this time to free them from captivity...

Notes:
1) Hide & Seek- Second and triple guessing Gaia's conclusion and plans in response to the HOPE plan.
2) Athena used a drug called Tricyano Aminopropene on the Badside "guests" (Vol.1 The Promethean Challenge). Excerpt from Man and civilization : control of the mind, a symposium edited by Seymour M. Farber, Roger H. L. Wilson. McGraw-Hill, New York, 1961 regarding this chemical: "The one real disturbance of surface calm however, the only one generated by this conference, happened in the Holgar Hyden presentation, his aside about "tricyano-aminopropene" on p.38, briefly given popular attention in Fate Magazine and there christened "TAP." Dr Hyden says "There is now evidence that the administration of tricyano-aminopropene is followed by an increased suggestibility in man.. could be used for conditioning.. not difficult to imagine the possible uses to which a government in a police-controlled state could put this substance. For a time, they would subject the population to hard conditions. Suddenly the hardship would be removed, and at the same time, the substance would be added to the tap water and the mass-communications media turned on. This method would be much cheaper, and would create more intriguing possibilities, than to let Ivanov treat Rhubasjov individually for a long time, as Koestler described in his book. On the other hand, a countermeasure against the effect of a substance such as tricyano-aminopropene [with practice you can spell this right every time!] is not difficult to imagine either.." That really quite fit in to what happened to Chiffon and gang don't you think?...
3) The level of security of prisons (both Elder's cell and the Olympus Crime Analysis and Remand Center) is ridiculously lax, with distracted guards and many means of undeterred escape, perhaps indicating that in Olympus there is no provision / neccesity for imprisonment of persons.
4) As to the reasoning behind Gaia's decision to go offensive, we have to look back at Dr. Isaac Asimov's Three Laws of Robotics:
i) A robot may not injure a human being or, through inaction, allow a human being to come to harm.
ii) A robot must obey orders given it by human beings except where such orders would conflict with the First Law.
iii) A robot must protect its own existence as long as such protection does not conflict with the First or Second Law.
Naturally the HOPE plan is a direct challenge to the First Law and hence, Gaia's offensive action in response. Wonder how something as fundamental as this escaped the reasoning of the "perfect" Bioroids.

Chapter 11: Zero Hour

The much anticipated Parade has begun! Athena and the Director were busy performing their public relations duties when suddenly, Olympus electricity supply systems automatically shuts down. The Heliostats were all shifted to focus at Tartarus' Control Tower. Emergency sequences were initiated and chaos ensued. Gaia was on Level Three Disaster Reaction Mode! Puzzled at first, it soon dawned upon Athena, and then later the Director as to what had happened as the Spider GPs went into formation and started firing canons at Tartarus - the Bioroid's research, control and development center. Public panic quickly drowned the city of Olympus into chaos as the SWAT Teams and Police Teams kicked into rapid deployment. The Spider GPs continue their rampage, unstoppable beasts programmed to destroy the Bioroid society. The Elder's predictions were correct after all but its too late and the only thing to do was to try stop Gaia's destructive actions.

Notes: 1) Zero Hour- Time's up! 2) Looks like Greenpeace Crolis (From Dominion Tank Police) is a resident of Olympus too! Unless that's her Bioroid clone. And looks like Buaku is being himself, up to no good and rousing the crowds :)

Greenpeace Crolis

Chapter 12: The Battle of Typhon

Back to our protaganists, as Deunan, Bri, Hitomi, Yoshi and Kotus (hereafter referred to as the "Appleseed Team") on alert mode in the middle of the chaos. Arugess had to abandon the team to protect his Bioroid identity. It didn't take long for one Spider GP to notice the Appleseed team, particularly Hitomi. After a series of intense gunfire exchange throughout the city, the Appleseed team tried their best to evade the persistent Spider GPs, now determined to get Hitomi. It would be impossible to take down the Spider GPs by sheer force as they prove to live up to their reputation as Olympus' invincible weapon against superpower military organizations. Not even Landmate combat squads can survive a shootout with the mobile gun platforms. The urgency now is to ge Hitomi to a H Block as soon as possible to shut down Olympus with Hitomi's DNA key. Navigating through underground fibre optics ducting, the team managed to finally get Hitomi to a H Block.

Tread carefully...

After verification by blood sample and endoscope probes, Hitomi managed to shut down The Spider GPs communication links. With teamwork in disarray and synchronization disabled among the Spider GPs, Olympus' SWAT teams routinely took down each Spider GPs. With the situation under some control, Athena finally got the opportunity to analyse the conversation and data generated by Gaia and Tartarus. What had provoked such a destructive response from Gaia? As the datas came pouring in, Athena deduced that Gaia actually rejected the HOPE plan, and not specifically targeting to destroy Bioroid pupulations. The outcome of the HOPE program, as predicted by Tartarus are Third Generation Bioroids, to produce Bioroids capable of handling stress of maintaining the Utopian condition of Olympus. Gaia, originally created to protect humans, perceived this as a threat to harm the human population. It could not accept Tartarus' prediction of wiping out humans and replacing them with third generation Bioroids. Knowing for a fact also that there would be enough votes in legislature to pass this plan, Gaia decided to take the offensive route, to destroy Tartarus and the Bioroids to eliminate the threat. Athena finally understood, that the problem of humanity's continued existence itself pre-dates the creation of Olympus; the definition of what is human, and what do humans really want, is not something that Bioroids and machines can understand. Have Bioroids and humans reached their limits? Is the Utopian dream over?

As the Spider GPs attacks ceased and Olympus city regained its composure, the Utopian impression was shattered. The unthinkable had happened- in a city where peace and freedom were taken for granted. Thinking that the fighting has stopped, the SWAT teams and Appleseed team were caught unawared when Gaia switched to Plan B. Still in control, Gaia focused its heliostats targeting the city's Nuclear plant. Destroying everything in its path with the intense heat generated by this 'magnifying glass' effect, Olympus' SWAT Teams once again scrambled to cope with this new form of attack. If the heat melts away and hits the Nuclear reactor, the consequences would be catastrophic! The only option now is to cut off part of Gaia's power supply, where without enough power to sustain itself, Gaia would have no choice but to re-direct its supplies to feed itself, reducing the temperature and reach of the Heliostats. Easier said than done!

Notes: Typhon is the offspring of Gaia and Tartarus. His mate is Echidna and both were so fearful that when the gods saw them they changed into animals and fled in terror. Typhon's hundred, horrible heads touched the stars, venom dripped from his evil eyes, and lava and red-hot stones poured from his gaping mouths. Hissing like a hundred snakes and roaring like a hundred lions, he tore up whole mountains and threw them at the gods. - from Encyclopedia Mythica (Greek Mythology)

Chapter 13: Apple Seed

Fortunately, the H Block where the Appleseed team hacked were connected by a passage directly to the Gaia Complex. Immediately Briareos and team headed for Gaia's central control. Infiltrating right to the 'brain' of the enemy, Hitomi and Yoshi tried to figure out means of shutting down the super-computer. Unknown to the team, Gaia has taken over Kotus and turned it on Deunan. Kotus, after all is 100% machine and is easily influenced by Gaia. Caught by surprise, Deunan's quick reflexes managed to save her life but Kotus' shot had damaged her Guges. Still standing the Kotus prepares for a final blow to take out Deunan, but just in time, Bri comes to her rescue. The Kotus proves to be an even match for Bri, as the two battled it out without restraint. Finally Bri goot the upper hand and destroyed Kotus. However, Bri sustained heavy damages from the fight and could hardly get any of his body's system functioning.

Surprise attack!

With the Kotus destroyed, the team can finally concentrate on the more important task at hand - neutralizing Gaia's Heliostat control sub-system. There are numerous backup circuits for the main supply cables, complicating an otherwise straighforward solution of severing all the power supply cables. Destroying the backup circuits would not help as Gaia would just lock up the Heliostats in place as starts re-routing its supplies through other backup routes. So the best solution would be to let the backup system function as normal, but at the same time cutting off its connection. Briareos has a solution, by plugging the backup circuit connector hole with a hollow point bullet, modified and loaded with an apple seed. The reduced velocity bullet will carry the Appleseed to plug the connector hole without smashing it to bits. Then it is up to Deunan to do the shooting as Bri's systems are not functioning properly. Deunan is troubled by the whole affair and is stressed about whether this is the right thing to do... at the last moment something triggered Deunan's memory, and she finally understood why this is right, and what is really important to her. Swiftly, she hit the bullseye and instantly Bri takes out the last power supply cable. The sequence went according to plan, and finally they managed to shut down Gaia.

Notes: 1)Apple Seed- I usually throw them in the bin after eating the apples :P 2)I think with hindsight, Gaia's backup supply circuit design has serious flaws... Most backup systems these days operate on power supply, not on function. So even if the mechanism works, but you don't get supply, it should immediately switch to the re-routing option. But then again, you need to tell a good story right? ^_^

Chapter 14: Cybernetics

Gaia finally stopped attacking, and it looks like the mission has been successfully accomplished! Athena was also visibly relieved with the conclusion of the attack, and gained some conclusions of her own on the affair. She realised that human nature is not at fault, rather, the optimism of Olympus and the HOPE plan will eventually lead to a dead society, one where there is no flexibility, ruled and occupied by lifeless machines.

As Athena contemplates, Gaia transmitted information to her which prompted Athena to immediately seek for a meeting with the Council. It seems that the proposal will actually be passed at the next legislature sitting even after the events that had transpired. However, Athena was not too worried about this, as she will ensure that a preservation of original species element to be included in the proposal. It might be a short term solution but the information Gaia had just transmitted to her allowed her to trigger Gaia's next development - The Age of The Bioroids...

The scene switches to our heroes, as they wind up a job well done with high spirits in their city, their home: Olympus...

The End of Appleseed Book 2: Prometheus Unbound

Notes from Lucas: Appleseed Book 1 & Book 2 could be considered a stand-alone story in itself. The event of Gaia's revolt is probably an important event in the history of Olympus, so instead of taking Appleseed to be a series of continuation, it would be better to view them as separate stand alone stories. Apart from the main story plot, an important point when reading Appleseed for me is Shirow Sensei's world building effort. The locations, the technologies, organization structures, etc are very important elements to induce some form of consistency to the Appleseed series (and that's why Appleseed Databook is so crucial to enhance our reading pleasure! ^_^). Anyway, I view Book 3 and Book 4 as separate stories, related only to Book 1 & Book 2 by its characters and backgrounds. So the review would be done sometime later.

posted by: Lucas at 02/17/05 21:58 | link | comments | Category: appleseed

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